The Darkness

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    • jerseycrtz
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    I wrote this when I was at school and I was mad at someone. Yes, it's childish, but 1) I am a child 2) It's my poem

    The Darkness

     The darkness surrounds me
    as I quetly sit in my seat
    my mind is racing through
    different possibilities
    but I keep them to myself
    How did she know?
    Why did she tell?
    I think until I decide
    I really don't want to know

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    zoeyvlad101 commented on The Darkness

    05-04-2010

    Nice, who were you mad at...
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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