Save me
Lies Unspoken.Words still unsaid.
I give up on,
trying to help you understand.
Now try and save me,
from this knife in my hand.
Save me
2 Comments
Words still unsaid.
I give up on,
trying to help you understand.
Now try and save me,
from this knife in my hand.
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03-14-2010
- This was so short but so touching, the pain and desire so overwhelming. The photo only enhanced the emotions. Well written 10 from me.
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jesusfreake commented on Save me
02-08-2010
- This pain is real...very real indeed and ur good at making ur reader feel exactly what u want them to...at the moment my wounds are re-opened and I remember the way it used to feel...dude, I'm sorry, remember that i'm here WHENEVER u need someone to talk to because no one else will listen or it doesnt seem like they give a care..
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02/09/2010
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