Salvation is heard... :: blackfootlady :: Original Poetry

Salvation is heard...

Salvation does not ask You to Live in Your Own Hell.
It does not cherish Your Soul If You Choose to sell.
Instead It grows deep within Your still Heart.
In between Your Beats that Salvation starts...
We breath in Salvation with Our Heart and Soul.
We carry this when We grow silent and old...
God be the Glory of Salvation's Home.
Whispering Wind as it blows and Salvation roams.
The Pieces of Us that go unheard.
The stillness of speech exchanged for words.
Be merciful to Souls harmed and torn.
Be grateful to New Ones that are born.
For Salvation is The Soul set free...
It Lives in Powers of Prayers God Sees...
Salvation is the Flight of Peace;Not War!
Salvation is heard and will forever roar.
Above Our Heaven towards The Holy Gate.
Threw The Everlasting Light of Life past unseen Hate.
Where Angels become apparent by offering Their Hand.
Salvation travels deep within Us to see A Promise Land.
A Place The Heavenly Light does not scorn no more...
For Salvation will be A Key to open Your Door.
Salvation is heard in a home where ignorance is done.
Where in differences aren't counted and wrong.

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ApaqRasgirl commented on Salvation is heard... 11-26-2010: that was truly marvelous dear.....these four lines really touched my heart...... Salvation is heard and will forever roar. Above Our Heaven towards The Holy Gate. Threw The Everlasting Light of Life past unseen Hate. Where Angels become apparent by offering Their Hand. truly an amazing piece of inspiration as you have always written them so well...keep the light of peace and love always in your heart and soul my friend.......love asha; Reply to Comment

blackfootlady 11/27/2010: I was told always listen to good words.I'm listening and I ty friend.Love -Black

gregster commented on Salvation is heard... 11-26-2010: i like it,now cool,,salvation is CHRIST DYING ON CROSS AT CALVARY FOR US SINNERS,,,,,IT IS A GIFT OF GOD AND CANNOT BE EARNED NOR BOUGHT...read EPHESIANS 2..; Reply to Comment

blackfootlady 11/26/2010: I don't have a Bible,I Just Follow the Will of God and Listen to His Peoples Cries in Life.

abuelita1 commented on Salvation is heard... 10-30-2010: Great write. Very enjoyable. Well written, and very inspiring.; Reply to Comment

blackfootlady 10/30/2010: Why Ty for Your Comment.It was just as enjoyable.God Bless-Black

cousinsoren commented on Salvation is heard... 10-30-2010: I venture to emphasize Hampton's comment. He says it well in estimation of this didactic,inspirational piece " This poem is very lyrical and well written. Poems that convey messages that are meaningful are rare and this poem carries a strong message. I also like the rhyming scheme which doesn't use disinct exact rhymes but instead uses variations in words that sound similar. Very well done.; Reply to Comment

blackfootlady 10/30/2010: Why Thank You so much! I did work hard on that particular Poem.I hope You get a chance to read more of them.God Bless- Black

cousinsoren commented on Salvation is heard... 10-30-2010: I venture to emphasize Hampton's comment. He says it well in estimation of this didactic, his poem is very lyrical and well written. Poems that convey messages that are meaningful are rare and this poem carries a strong message. I also like the rhyming scheme which doesn't use disinct exact rhymes but instead uses variations in words that sound similar. Very well done. inspirational piece:; Reply to Comment

blackfootlady 11/26/2010: It is hard for to explain the stillness of Jesus Heart on the cross.I tried to do a good job but others did not understand the inner meaning that I tried to describe.Then I tried Peacefully the journey in the end,Then I tried To decribe A better Place using a very sutle approach.For those of You that could comprehend the piece I wrote I Thank You.I also appreciate Your kind comment Sir-God Bless-Black

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