Open To Forgive

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  • Neardeath Exsperience
    • blackfootlady
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    This Poem is based on children in abusive situations.This particular inciddent would of sent my Dad to jail.Separated an entire family from it's brothers and sisters due to it be a large family.But on the same note no child should ever be abused to point they have a neardeath exsperience and see an Angel...So I chose merci at the age of seven.I thought about my mom and my brothers and sisters.Maybe If people see this they can find better answers for kids. A Seven yrs old is too young of an age to learn merci in this manner.The ironic part it was a drunken stooper that only took 15 minute.All i'm saying is think about your kids first before you fester in anger on a drunken or drug related stooper it changes lives.So when we are all in the flight of anger over the dishes not being done beware of meal God is serving that evening. you may not be that blessed.

    Open To Forgive

     I thought I might speak to all of you.
    I had a horrific childhood;It's very true.
    So full of unjustified issues,remorse,and pain.
    It render me helpless and made me feel insane.
    The only way to escape it's curse was to see the real.
    I sit before you beckoned to kneel.
    One night my Dad was drunk and hurt me badly.
    A merciful Angel appeared before me very sadly.
    The look on His face as I felt the presence in my Grace.
    The Angel merciful for both in A God forgiven place.
    Today after remembering the Angels' teachings.
    It was meant for All of us that Angel reaching...
    The forgiveness between both shown on a cold,cold,night.
    Being taught by that Angel that comforted me into the light.
    I wrote this passage to correct our inner fears...
    That you may not believe and cause more tears.
    It is all about Mercy handed to both for I returned to live.
    A remembrance of love that should make us all open to forgive.

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    loneehorse commented on Open To Forgive

    12-12-2009

    Very Nice Picture.I almost admire your Art work more than your poetry.Outstanding work.Ty for sharing with me.
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    coacher commented on Open To Forgive

    12-10-2009

    Very well done. Great message. I have been a foster parent for 24 years and I understand the depth of this write. Pain caused by a parent is difficult to deal with. I hope that time gives you peace and success. Keep up the good work. Thank you for you sharing.
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    blackfootlady

    12/10/2009

    Your to be commended.Taking care of foster children can be very difficult but you seem to have a skill.Thank you for viewing and your posetive comment.Your welcome to view as much poetry on my site as you can,ty

    jademelissa74 commented on Open To Forgive

    12-09-2009

    This is indeed an excellent piece. The pain, anguish and acceptance shared through your poem is very well conveyed. You give us hope. You showed the way. You brushed off the old and welcomed the new. Great write!
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    blackfootlady

    12/09/2009

    Some pieces are not easy to write...ty for showing that it has values,churv has more of my writings.

    Prettykan82 commented on Open To Forgive

    12-09-2009

    This is very deep..............must have been tasking to put the emotions in pen and paper, but glad you did, it speaks to many....
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    blackfootlady

    12/09/2009

    Very and I also feel that God judges those who judge.Ty you for your insight.churv

    redbloodink commented on Open To Forgive

    12-08-2009

    powerful................................. Red
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    blackfootlady

    12/08/2009

    At the time I felt powerless,but compelled to take about it now after all this time.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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