If I were poor?

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    • blackfootlady
    • Friends Gather in hope.It's Faith that leads them to Destiny!

    If I were poor?

     Could you see me,or would you laugh?
    If I smelled badly?
    Would you offer to give me a bath?
    If I were starving?
    Would you offer me a meal?
    If I were bleeding?
    Would you help me to Heal?
    If I had nothing to give to you...
    Would you just let me be blue?
    Could you help me out?
    Or would you still have this doubt?
    The question asked to two gentleman pondered.
    The beggar just stood and move yonder...
    Then they ignored this poor old man.
    Just about dying just where he stands.
    The  beggar turns his back next as this is told.
    That poor old man with his angel wings exposed.

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    Bettysrainbow48 commented on If I were poor?

    12-12-2009

    THE POOR WILL BE BESIDE JESUS AS ARE THE RICH TO HIM WE ARE ALL EQUAL YOU MADE A GOOD POINT
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    blackfootlady

    12/12/2009

    I've seen alot of mistreated people in my time I just wanted to open there heart to see that life could truely be a test.TY For your comment.Luv,churv

    jademelissa74 commented on If I were poor?

    12-07-2009

    The need to observe cautiously and to remember that we are blessed to be a blessing is very well conveyed. Often times, we walk through life ignoring the small details. You remind us through this piece that we must keep are eyes open before we miss the abundant blessing that are in store. Thank you!
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    blackfootlady

    12/07/2009

    I was taught by my Dad that Life is a staircase.Alway be kind to each step you take in life.It maybe the same step you will need to get thru your drama.Such a wise Man yet He wasted His Life Drinking insainely.Thank you for your comment and insight,God Bless You too.

    crazzyy4u commented on If I were poor?

    12-04-2009

    wow really good it teaches not to be selfish for youll never know who would come upon you nice job
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    blackfootlady

    12/04/2009

    I feel you treat someone with respect.the way you would like to be treated.Ty for the comment,Tc and God Bless

    Lolee commented on If I were poor?

    09-09-2009

    Very interesting. The bible says "Be careful, lest you entertain angels, and be unaware." I like the poem very much.
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    blackfootlady

    12/02/2009

    Lolee I noticed you came back to comment my poems .ty for taking an interest in them

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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