Poetic Justice

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    • blackfootlady
    • Friends Gather in hope.It's Faith that leads them to Destiny!

    Poetic Justice

    You sit loose and all fancy-free...
    Your riches engulf your eyes to see.
    Maybe it's your own selfish desire.
    Or the clothes that impress your attire.
    Could it be you think your the smartest?
    Perhaps your stuck on you or your the best?
    What is it like;to think your better?
    I hope you finally open this letter:
    For inside these shameful line reside.
    As children dye starving on planet earth.
    While you support your hide and worthO
    Our Men dying in Wars around us too.
    Just so you can be a wealthy and selfish you.
    Still we have not changed our barbaric ways.
    As for the letter I hope it sticks and stays...
    One line that may hurt the most is your choice.
    Heaven is designed for just your soul,spirit and voice!
    Your not taking this with you in your time of need.
    Poetic Justice will upset you more as you read.
    The new beat is for all to change and must.
    After-all the joker of Justice is Just-us...
    For knowledge is obtained and learned.
    What page did you forget to turn?
    I thought friendships were the most important thing.
    I'm truly sorry you sought vanity and this stings.
    If your stuck there in confusion and can't sort it out.
    Your most likely the One it's  not all about. 

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Poetic Justice

    03-11-2010

    that is very deep, well written, but I have to say I was not sure if I got the meaning correct. I think it was about breaking up with someone you thought you could trust. not sure but still I really liked the flow of this. thanks for sharing love Asha
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    blackfootlady

    03/11/2010

    See it's about selfish people.If you don't understand it then maybe your not selfish......

    loneehorse commented on Poetic Justice

    12-12-2009

    It is a gift to recieve but it is a blessing to give,well done.You have worked hard at this and i'll alway be back,ty
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    mamasan commented on Poetic Justice

    12-10-2009

    The tags here are justice and that always is tempered by the politics on the table; and is so damn confusing it can even get your dear friend to question a relationship built on the simple things and its name is true friend. So, perhaps reread that page and then read it again; because you never should mix politics with friendship,
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    blackfootlady

    12/10/2009

    thats pretty funny if it was taken politically...

    countrypoet commented on Poetic Justice

    12-09-2009

    There are so many people that have been blessed with wealth and don't realize that with that gift have been given a responsibility to help others,who are less fortunate.Thank you for sharing this well written and inspiring poem. Terry
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    blackfootlady

    12/09/2009

    If we all relieze that a petistool doesn't make you inportant sharing and caring does there would be no one starving.Ty Terry

    DeepEclipse commented on Poetic Justice

    12-08-2009

    Ah yes indeed. We buy low and sell high which translates into screw over the next man so you get a bigger cut. How much blood does money have on its hands......one can only wonder. A poem with eyes wide open. Treasuring what truly matters. Well stated.
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    blackfootlady

    12/08/2009

    DeepEclipse ,Ty.Some people refer to me as a troubled because I place the cards shown in the face of god to see...Now it's verbly writtened.God Bless

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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