"SOMETHING FISHY"

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    THIS WAS REQUESTED TO WRITE FOR A BAR THAT WE SANG, IT'S BASED ON "TRUE" FACTS,,,,,,,AND I CANT TAKE A DARE! LOL, IT'S NOW ENLARGED AND HUNG ON THEIR WALL!
             HOPE YOU ENJOY! CAROLYN

    "SOMETHING FISHY"

     I WAS DRIVING ONE DAY, AND DEVELOPED A THIRST,
    NOT TO MENTION MY BLADDER WAS FIXING TO BURST!
    COULDN'T DRIVE ANY FURTHUR, I WAS GOING TO DROP,
    WHEN I SPOTTED A "BEER STORE" WITH THE NAME

                                "POP-A-TOP"
    I THOUGHT "WHAT THE HELL", I'LL GIVE IT A SHOT,
    I ALMOST PASSED BY IT,,,,,WHAT A DARK BLINDED SPOT!
    I WALKED IN THE DOOR, I WAS REALLY IMPRESSED!
    "THE VARIETY"OF LIQUER,,,AND THE BEER!!I'VE BEEN "BLESSED"!
    LIKE A KID IN A TOY STORE, "MY ADRENALIN"RUSHED,
    I CAUGHT MYSELF "SCREACHING",,REALIZED IT AND HUSHED!
    HAVING A "BUZZ", FEELING WASHY AND WISHY",
    I NOTICED HIS NEIGHBOR, WITH THE NAME

                               "SOMETHING FISHY"

    AGAIN," WHAT THE HELL", I'LL GIVE IT A TRY,
    I'VE STILL GOT SOME "MONEY", WHAT ELSE CAN I BUY?
    OH NO!!! IT'S A "BAR", AND A NICE ONE AT THAT,
    THE PEOPLE SEEM FRIENDLY, I'LL SIT AND JUST CHAT!

    "THE FOOD" IS FANTASTIC! "KARAOKE'S" NOT BAD,
    I'M HAVING THE BEST TIME, THAT I'VE EVER HAD!
    OMG!!!! IT'S THE "SPRINGER SHOW"!, IT'S HAPPENING TO ME!
    I'M LOOKING FOR "JERRY", BUT IT'S "STEVE" THAT I SEE!

    I MOVED TO THE "BAR", STILL TRYING TO "THINK",
    SHOULD I ASK FOR HIS AUTOGRAPH? OR ORDER A DRINK?
    MY HANDS BECOME SWEATY, MY TONGUE BECOME THICK,
    MY STOMACHES SO "NERVOUS",,,,,I'M GONNA BE SICK!

    I SAT VERY QUIET, WHILE ROLLING MY SLEEVE,
    WHEN THE GIRL NEXT TO ME SHOUTED "STEVE" STEVE" STEVE"!!
    HE STARTED OUR WAY,,,HANDS UP TO SURRENDER,
    THEN, "WHOOPS!" THE WRONG STEVE,,,,,,HE'S JUST THE "BARTENDER"!

    I'VE HAD SO MUCH FUN!, DIDN'T WANT IT TO STOP!
    THEY'VE WON A "NEW CUSTOMER", AT THE OLE'

                                "POP-A-TOP"!!!!!!!!


                                                                               CAROLYN LOVE

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    raziel69 commented on "SOMETHING FISHY"

    07-11-2009

    this is great, you can feel the atmosphere and see what is around you. i like it, 10 from me, my friend
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    carol1952

    07/11/2009

    yes it was jamming and we sang their request! lol dont go there much anymore, carol, thx again

    laydbak1 commented on "SOMETHING FISHY"

    07-10-2009

    Silly izz azz silly duzz.... This is a nice little chuckler... good write...
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    carol1952

    07/10/2009

    lol thx man,carol

    ATCS commented on "SOMETHING FISHY"

    07-08-2009

    i love good humor and alcoholism. 2 things every good breakfast should not be without. ty for a smile. much love.
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    carol1952

    07/09/2009

    lol i hear ya my friend! glad yu enjoyed but most of all made yu smile!, thx my friend,carol

    Tempestlady commented on "SOMETHING FISHY"

    07-08-2009

    Well done! very funny, got a cat in the hat cadence. Hilarious! Loved it! Do more humor. Write on....
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    carol1952

    07/09/2009

    hahaha that poem is actually a "real place"!,they requested me to write one so i did! thx for letting me know yu got a smile out of it,carol

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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