"FANTASY FROM THE "PASSED"

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    "FANTASY FROM THE "PASSED"

     SO, I AM HERE
    ANOTHER NIGHT,THE CLOCK TICKS ON, BUT IT CAN'T BE RIGHT!
    ALL I DO IS THINK OF "YOU",A "CANDLE LIGHT", AND A "DANCE" OR TWO.
    YOUR BEAUTY, YOUR CHARM, AND YOUR SWEET PERFUME,
    I'M GONNA GO CRAZY! ALL ALONE IN THIS ROOM!

    I TOSS AND TURN IN THIS BED "RESTLESSLY",
    I FEEL IN MY HEART YOU SHOULD BE RIGHT HERE WITH ME.
    I JUST FELL ASLEEP, WHEN SOMEONE KNOCKED ON THE DOOR,
    I SHOUTED "WHO IS IT!?", AND A  VOICE SAID "IT'S ME".
    AS I OPENED" THE DOOR,,,,,,,"OH NO! THIS CAN'T BE"!
    MY WONDERFUL "ANGEL" HAS COME TO SEE ME!

    OUR EYES MET EACH OTHERS, SHE REACHED OUT HER HAND,
    SHE WHISPERED SO SOFTLY "I'M AT YOUR COMMAND".
    WHEN OUR BODIES HAD TOUCHED,,,,,,,I CAN'T DESRIBE
    HOW I FELT,
    IF I WERE SOME CHOCOLATE? IN NO TIME I'D MELT!

    HER KISSES WERE PASSIONET, HER TOUCH WAS UNREAL,
    OUR "LOVEMAKING" WAS "MAGICAL",I ASKED "IS THIS REALLY YOU"?
    ALL MY YEARS HAD THIS "FANTASY", BUT COULD THIS BE TRUE??
    IF I'M DREAMING, DON'T WAKE ME!
    FOR MY "DREAM" HAD COME TRUE.


    SOME ROSES, AND CANDLE LIGHT, AND A "NOTE" LEFT FOR ME,
    SAYING: SEE YOU WERE ALSO "MY FANTASY" TO BE"!!
    I FOUND HER APARTMENT, AND KNOCKED ON THE DOOR,
    WHEN I ASKED" IS SHE HERE?"
    THEIR EYES FILLED WITH "TEARS",
    "SON, HAVEN'T YOU HEARD?" "SHE'S BEEN DEAD FOR TWO YEARS"

    THOSE WORDS HIT ME HARD!, I FELL TO MY KNEES!
    I'VE KNOWN HER SINCE "CHILDHOOD",
    I'D FLIRT, AND SHE'D TEASE.
    WE'D RUN INTO EACH OTHER, AS LIFE PASSED US ON,
    "THERE'S NO WAY SHE'S DEAD"!
    "I WON'T BELIEVE THAT SHE'S GONE"!

    "I" WAS WITH "HER" LAST NIGHT! BUT HOW CAN I SAY?!
    THEY'D TAKE ME TO A "HOME",THEY'D PUT ME AWAY!

    SO, I SIT AND I STARE AT THE SKY THAT'S SO BLUE,
    WAS IT JUST A "PAST FANTASY" THAT I HAD DREAMED THROUGH?
    ""YOUR'RE UP THERE AND WATCHING,,,,,,,,"YOU THINK OF ME TOO"!

    I STILL SEE HER "SMILE", AND I SMELL HER "PERFUME",
    "WE'RE YOU JUST "A DREAM"?
    COULD IT BE JUST THIS "ROOM"?
    "I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER" TIL IT'S MY "TIME" TO DIE,
    LEAVING "SADNESS" OF ANOTHER, TO "STARE" AT THE SKY......


                                                                               CAROLYN LOVE

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    Hampton commented on "FANTASY FROM THE "PASSED"

    07-12-2009

    A poetic novel containing a story of love and loss all neatly packaged in a style that keeps the reader engrossed until the very end. Nicely done.
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    carol1952

    07/12/2009

    THX MY FRIEND, WASN'T TOO SURE ON THAT ONE LOL THX AGAIN,CAROL

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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