"BORROWED TIME"

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    "BORROWED TIME"

     MY WORLD WAS ALL CHANGED, WITH THE BLINK OF AN EYE,

    "SOMETHING" WAS STIRRING, I COULDN'T DENY.

     "HE" DOESN'T KNOW YET,,WHAT HE'S DOING TO ME,

    HE EASILY BRINGS OUT ,,,,,THE BEST PART OF ME!


    COULD "HE" BE AN "ANGEL"? GOD SENT FROM ABOVE?

    TO TAKE CARE OF ME,,,,,,,SHOWERS ME WITH HIS LOVE?

    WHEN I AM WITH HIM,,I NOT SHED A TEAR,
    WHEN "HE" TOUCHES ME?,,,,,,,,I HAVE NO MORE FEAR.


    HE'S GIVEN ME LIFE,,,,,I'VE NOT FELT FOR AWHILE,

    HE "GLOWS" LIKE AN "ANGEL",,WHEN HE GIVES ME THAT SMILE.


    MAGICAL THINGS,,,,,,,,TOGETHER WE'VE MADE,




                   HE BROUGHT BACK MY "FAITH",,,,,,,WAS BEGINNING TO FADE.

    I'M LIVING A "DREAM", I PRAYED WOULD COME TRUE!

    I FELT MYSELF "FALLING",,,,,AND HE FELT IT TOO.

    I FEEL HE'S MY "MIRACLE", THAT I'M LOOKING FOR,

    HE MAKES ME FEEL "BLESSED",,I'LL NOT LOOK NO MORE!

    HE'S GIVEN ME "PEACE" AND "FULFILLMENT" WITHIN,

    COULD "THIS" BE FOR REAL?

    I'M SO SCARED TO GIVE IN!!!!

    HE'S ALL THAT I SPEAK OF! TIL THE END OF THE DAY,

    "YOU'VE NOT BEEN THIS HAPPY!",,,,,"YOUR EYES GLOW NOW", THEY SAY.


    I'M NOT "PUSHING" OR "PRESSURING", IN "FEAR" THAT HE'LL SLACK!

           I JUST "PRAY" EACH DAY THAT MY "ANGEL" COMES BACK..........



                                                                     CAROLYN LOVE

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    laydbak1 commented on "BORROWED TIME"

    07-10-2009

    The temptation to believe can be so great from only a show of kindness from another we think we can trust... I hope this one indeed, turned out the saving angel you perceived... A good write...
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    carol1952

    07/10/2009

    thx my friend yur comment means alot to me,carol

    Tempestlady commented on "BORROWED TIME"

    07-08-2009

    This is a very insightful work. Angels come in many forms and for many reasons for me and my family. i am glad you have been blessed with a shining one. You must be very special. My father has a guardian, i have a trickster, there are others i cannot share, but it doesn't mean they aren't there. Write on.....
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    carol1952

    07/09/2009

    amen! i agree! i feel that god puts the words in my head and i do the writing ,thx again, carol

    TruthDesires commented on "BORROWED TIME"

    07-08-2009

    This is a very good piece, it speaks to you while reading.
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    carol1952

    07/08/2009

    THX MY FRIEND,I SPEAK FROM MY HEART, I ALSO ENJOYED YOURS,CAROL

    Hampton commented on "BORROWED TIME"

    07-07-2009

    A simple but very poignant poetic confession of love and admiration presented in the poets uniique style.
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    carol1952

    07/07/2009

    thx for the comment my friend, i appreciate it,carol

    demacus commented on "BORROWED TIME"

    07-07-2009

    very very nicely done u have alot of poetic talent and thank you for adding me as a friend on here u hope to read lots more of your writing
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    carol1952

    07/07/2009

    thx my friend, nice to meet yu and i was impressed with yurs too, keep up the good work!, carol

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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