Love, Cant Help You Now

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    Love, Cant Help You Now

     have you forgotten your words or how to speak?
    you chose not to hear me
    as if im not standing in front of you
    your eyes meet mine in a dead stare
    but you look right through me
    i streach out my arms to embrace you
    but you cant feel the warmth of my touch
    you chose to deaden your heart to the very memory of me
    now you get on you knees, and grip your heart
    as you strech out your arms you cry out "My Love is For you"
    as if you think it can save you from pain.. as you slowly fade away
    i whisper your love can't help you now dearest

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    carynontherhine commented on Love, Cant Help You Now

    07-12-2010

    Excellent! I hung on to these words on this one. Memorized for a time that will face me in my future I know. And to whisper in the end. Not your supposed love for me nor mountains could move me to want to hold you once more. Great! Great writting!
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    angel33614 commented on Love, Cant Help You Now

    05-11-2010

    COLD, I CAN FEEL THE CHILLS TO THE VERY CORE OF MY BONES, OUCH! LOVE BITES! IT IS FUNNY THAT AFTER THEY RIPE YOUR HEART OUT STILL BEATING FROM YOUR CHEST AND STAB IT WITH DEADLY KNIVES AND CUT IT UP IN THOUSANDS OF LITTLE SCARRED PEICES THAT WHEN THEY BEGIN TO HURT THEY TRY RUNNING BACK AND SAYING I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU MY ASS!!! GOOD FOR YOU FOR NOT TAKING HIM BACK, SHOWS YOU HAVE MORE RESPECT FOR YOURSELF THAN YOU KNOW, MANY WOULD HAVE RUN BACK TO HIS ARMS WIDE OPEN. I CAN NEVER REPLACE YOU LOST LOVE NOR CAN HEAL ALL YOUR WOUNDS AND SCARS BUT IF YOU LIKE I AM HERE, AS A FRIEND IF YOU NEED ME... PURITY OF THE SOUL, JOURNEY WELL!!! ANGEL
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    UntouchedSoul

    05/11/2010

    I'm Glad you got that :) as a semi-wise man once said love kills slowly :D -Ed Hardy- Thanks for eyes and ears, I'll return the favor one day

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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