Lost

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    Lost

     someone please find me soon
    because i really need to know
    that some part of me is still alive
    i need to hear someone say
    that everything will be alright
    this time i really need them to mean it
    this time it has to be true
    because im so low it scares me
    that im not sure i'm still alive
    so please someone find me tonight
    someone tell me that i'll be fine
    i'm in need of your help
    because im so completely torn
    because im so very lonely now
    Dear God, i need someone to hold me
    because i'm slipping away
    i cant hear you, i cant see you, are you still here?

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    Crush commented on Lost

    10-18-2010

    "scars remind us that the past is real" but love cements a different sweeter reality that i hope you find, soon. i am here listening and reading you, for what its worth.
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    carynontherhine commented on Lost

    07-14-2010

    Seems as though you are looking for someone to validate your existence. I love your writing. All of it. You are very talented. Keep on with your journey. You give others inspiration. I know you have me. Caryn on the Rhine
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    Rhymer commented on Lost

    06-02-2010

    Your writing reaches out to everyone that reads these heart felt lines. Wings surround you, feel the warmth and bask in knowledge everyone send their love.
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    angel33614 commented on Lost

    05-11-2010

    I CAN FEEL YOUR PAIN AS IT WAS MY VERY OWN, PERHAPS BECAUSE READING YOUR POEMS BRINGS THOSES HIDDEN PAINS FROM MY PAST TO THE FOREFRONT, BRINGS BACK THE MEMORIES I HIDE SOO WELL IN MY DUSTY OLD HOUSE. YOU ARE DEFINTELY NOT DEAD YET, IF PAIN TELL US ONE THING IT IS THIS, WE ARE STILL ALIVE... I AM NOT PERFECT AND EVEN THOUGH MY NICKNAME IS ANGEL I AM CERTAINLY NO ANGEL BUT I CAN CERTAINLY BE A FRIEND IF YOU NEED ONE... PURITY OF THE SOUL, JOURNEY WELL!!! ANGEL
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    thecross commented on Lost

    05-09-2010

    Loneliness has a way of bringing fears to the front of the mind and the fears linger until the loneliness fades. Nice write of emotion and if this right arose from a realistic place and you need to talk don't be a stranger. ;)
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    UntouchedSoul

    05/09/2010

    Thanks, yea all my poems seem to come from a realistic place, i'll keep that in mind hun, :) tho i typically hate to burden others with my problems

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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