lost

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    lost

    My heart is bleading,
    You left a gapeing hole.
    you are like a bullet,
    Riping threw my sole.

    I am seeing only darkness,
    There are no stars tonight.
    My body my be here,
    but my spirit has taken flight.

    I am a shrinking shadow,
    lost in the corridors of my dark.
    Lost to this life
    till some one saves my heart

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    BCP commented on lost

    06-27-2009

    love is such a lovely thing in our life and everyone needs and wants love. when it goes bad we are in a dark hole for some time until we gain our balance and gain strenght to get back up and go like crazy again. excellent poem. sincerely
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    wildpendigus commented on lost

    06-25-2009

    I think this is your best poem, I'll bet this would be a good R&B song with right ingredients! it's very nice It's unique, I like the title also, keep writing you'll master this craft sooner than later grecowong@yahoo.com
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    greyeyes231

    06/26/2009

    Thank you

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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