In the Dark I will wait for you

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In the Dark I will wait for you

In the dark I will wait,
You wont see me till its too late.

The shadows are my friend,
hiding my aproch around the bend.

Behind the Oak, behind the brush,
you cant see me, you cant touch.

I know you sense me near,
like a drug, i smell your fear

It calls me, your beating heart,
I can almost see your blood in the dark.

Your breath stutters as you look around,
only darkness is what you have found.

I rush in and bite your vain,
draining you of your life and pain.











By Crystalin Patrick 6/27/2009

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bluskyinthenite commented on In the Dark I will wait for you

04-12-2010

hmm so this is Dark poetry. ? not sure so i'm reading some. came across your and like it.

DarkChi commented on In the Dark I will wait for you

08-06-2009

nice! vampire poems! i like! and you look familiar...but i'm not sure....

mdpoetgirl commented on In the Dark I will wait for you

07-08-2009

Vampire, huh?... great description and imagery, cold and calculated as it should be for the subject matter. Enjoyed reading this one.

Artie commented on In the Dark I will wait for you

07-07-2009

Nice and eerie.... Just my style... How did you know?

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