Burning Love

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Burning Love

My heart pounded in my chest every time you came near.
My lungs seemed not able to get enough air.
When you touched me my skin became a flame.
My eyes Tightly closed.
My lips awaited yours.
My hands wanting to touch you.
My soul reaching to hold yours.
The waiting seemed forever.
I slowly open my eyes and find you are just a dream.













By Crystalin Patrick 6/15/2009

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wildpendigus commented on Burning Love

06-18-2009

it's very good short and sweet, but very different and people can relate to what you are saying it would be a very nice song, although it is a very nice poem within itself, so keep writing and you'll get better every time grecowong@yahoo.com

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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