Little Girl Lost

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    • nini2323
    • I once knew everything, and now I know nothing.

    Little Girl Lost

    Little girl lost, where did you go?
    Have you gone to the city to score some blow?
    Are you lost there among the prophets and whores?
    Are you hanging around waiting to score?

    Little girl lost, where have you been?
    Did you find what you wanted there with those men?
    Do you wonder why they never stay through the night?
    Or are you using sex, as a weapon tonight?

    Little girl lost, where have you gone?
    Do you remember a heart that once beat strong?
    Did you leave it there to die in the gutter?
    Left to beat out in one shaky flutter?

    Little girl lost, please come home soon.
    I miss you like the sun misses the moon.
    Without you I'm lost in this city alone.
    Without you I have no place to call home.

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    lonewolf commented on Little Girl Lost

    09-26-2013

    Powerful.....raw....emotional.... pleading. Maybe a life experience...maybe not. But strong enough to want to make people reach out and help
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    SuSpence commented on Little Girl Lost

    05-01-2010

    Amazing write Nini, I can certainly see why you directed me here, Great minds do think alike and we are two great minds If I do say so myself! Haha. It's funny, but this could be the prostitute charachter in my poem, pretty cool. Great mind or kindered spirits? You decide, Tonight at eleven! -Spence, Off to read Pot Cookies......
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    frazel5 commented on Little Girl Lost

    10-25-2009

    Wow....just wow. So raw and emotional. Beautiful job. I can only hope that this was not written out of experience.
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    Mandi commented on Little Girl Lost

    10-17-2009

    I do like reading your RHYMING poems although I hope this is not indcative of your own life
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    Artie commented on Little Girl Lost

    10-17-2009

    Nice piece!! There are so many that are lost in some way, that it's becoming common. 10 from me
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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