Internal Blue Wind

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    Internal Blue Wind
    Finding conflict in the simplest places
    To feel something
    Find something

    Losing what it always meant to be you
    Caught up in
    Caught up with

    Breaking loose into a rushing wave
    With the flow
    From the flow

    Soaring into the blistering blue wind
    Flying high
    Flying strong

    Knowing what will wait for me
    See me drift
    Catch my drift

    Fighting a losing battle to win a war
    Fight and run
    Fight and live

    Beginning all over again
    To find who you are
    To try who you are

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    ginga commented on Internal Blue Wind

    07-22-2009

    heartspill, I love your repetitive lines that give different and sometimes opposing messages to the reader. This simple poem is quite abstract in it's own right. Thanks for sharing this unique style. (Simple in purity I mean otherwise quite deep). ginga
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    MsFee commented on Internal Blue Wind

    03-02-2009

    this is very beautiful and insightful
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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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