Forgotten

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    Forgotten

    Pretty faces,
    Forgotten names &
    Abandoned spaces,

    Where they once remembered you,
    Where they once embraced your being.

    Pretty eyes,
    Forgotten teardrops &
    Empty cries,

    Where they once had mourned for you,
    Where they once watched your face.

    Pretty smile
    Forgotten muscles &
    Hollow guile,

    Where they once performed for you,
    Where they once charmed your mind

    Pretty hands,
    Forgotten fingers &
    Silent demands,

    Where they once grasped for you,
    Where they once held your forgotten fate.

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    DeepEclipse commented on Forgotten

    03-17-2009

    I'm loving the structure. Uniquely stated and created.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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