I Need It

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I Need It

When I saw your face I knew I would need it. When our presences weren't connected my visions
 
turned gray. I gave you the book of knowledge and you gave me the book of ignorance. Our
 
time together was great but it was ended too soon I didn't have enough lovin for you so you
 
shook me up and I didn't even wanna get back up. But hey that's life, I walk down the streets of
 
the deep down south listening to the harmonicas play. They remind me of your roughness and
 
how you treated me. I loved every second of it. You may have pushed me away but I still have
 
your book do you still have mine?

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Cindy80 commented on I Need It

09-29-2009

you have wrote one awesome piece of work... I wish you the best of luck

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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