Angel.

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    Angel.
    Oh angel who came down from the heavens bring me the light that I want and desire. Bring me
     
    no sadness nor pity, cast upon me a robe of gold which in due time will liberate me from the
     
    darkness cold. I summoned you to carry out my will but you alone have ended all my ambitions.
     
    So I ask of you for this one simple request. When you come back to this earth, separate me
     
    from the scorching desires that your lord of fire demands and expects. For I have loved you
     
    unconditionally in all the many aspects. But if you choose to betray me I will bring forth to you,
     
    many curses which no gods hath desired. It will be out of broken dreams and broken hearts that
     
    the simple mortal has acquired the weapons of apocalyptic powers. His scourge will be great
     
    till his angel has brought him what he has truly desired.

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    Godsgang commented on Angel.

    09-29-2009

    It seems you do not understand God. the angels are his messangers and can only bring what God commands. So you cannot put a curse on them. As an alternative you could try asking God . But I will remind you that you cannot demand of God or his angels or it will be you that is cursed.
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    RasBongoTuff912

    09/29/2009

    The angels in this poem aren't the christian idea of angels. I took them out of general persepective and showed what they could be capable if they become intertwined with us as lovers.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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