GoodBye

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  • Farewell

    GoodBye

    Your eyes are closed while I stare at you...
    Distant memories stream ever so softly
    Your laugh, your smile...
    We must part ways
    Summers held our hearts
    While the winters warmed our soul
    We learned about life...
    We learned about sorrow
    Experienced joy
    And love undeniably began to grow
    Never knew it would end like this
    Feels like life dealt a Judas kiss
    I have been broken into pieces
    I  stand before you shattered inside
    Assumed we could somehow
    Manipulate the hands of time...
    But I am facing this day
    As the tears bleed from my eyes
    I place the rose on the casket
    And solemnly say good-bye.

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    Laurenrose commented on GoodBye

    03-11-2010

    Wow this is how I felt when my ex died. Its actually the one I wrote Believe about
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    danmartyjake1 commented on GoodBye

    02-16-2010

    Wow! Strong emotions and feelings are dealt and beautifully surmised within this touching poem. Intensely beautiful write.
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    blueberry commented on GoodBye

    02-13-2010

    A gentle and sweet way of expressing your sorrow. Really nice poem, I like it alot.
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    ReelLife

    02/13/2010

    Thank you, I appreciate your time and comment.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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