Dead

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    Dead

    The funeral starts, the people cry

    and yet I feel so cold.

    They look at me, I wonder why?

    These stares are getting old.

     

    One by one, they talk to me

    They say to rest in peace.

    I feel so trapped, I'm not free

    and yet I'm wrapped in fleece.

     

    I try to cry, I try to scream

    and yet I'm never heard.

    It's my soul, I can't redeem.

    I never speak a word.

     

    They lay me down, into this box.

    My family wonders why

    the man above, dumps the rocks

    why did I have to die?

     

    I worked so hard, to do what's right

    I screwed it up with Meth

    so here I am, I lost the fight.

    I created my own death.

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    Mrpoetry commented on Dead

    10-02-2009

    good poem venom, that's a warning to everyone that if you mess with meth, you will end up with death
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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