Alice In Wounder Land

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    THIS POEMS ABOUT BEING IN LOVE. AND NOT SEEING THAT PERSON EVERYDAY. AND HAVEING IT HURT AND FEEL LIKE HELL.

    NOT BEIN WITH THAT PERSON THE WAY YOU WISHED IS HELL.

    AND I HAD MY  SHARE OF THAT EXPERIANCE...ONCE UPON A TIME AGO LOL ENJOY
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    Alice In Wounder Land

    Sometimes i wish i wasnt dreaming. Cant beleave what i'm seeing.

    Dont want my feet to touch the earth.
     wish reality was hopeless & di-di-didnt hurt.

    I just wanted you to kno this.
    wish this dream would come true.
    i just wanna stay with you.
    and tell you i'm in L...

    But i cant stay..no not for long unfortunately I leave you with this song.

    __*
    I'm Liveing in hell.ther is no heaven for me .
    I'm stuck in this reality.
    things are messed up for me.
    I wounder if you can see me . I
    wounder if i can go back to that  maze. and as soon as they open they could look.
    I'm in alice and wounderlands book.

    Nana-na-nana

    Can you imajin us. Not bein far apart.
    Can you see me fi-fi-fixing up your heart.
    baby i just want you to kno.
    i could never let you_ go.
    but some how
    from the crazyness...it some how came to this.
    i'm fallin in a black hole.








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    stellar commented on Alice In Wounder Land

    11-13-2009

    This poem is very wonderful,,,Kind of my "From above the tower of luna" in the sense that both poem is kind of in denial of reality...wish u read it too...thank you karma
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    dahlusion commented on Alice In Wounder Land

    10-20-2009

    This piece is genius in its creative release and oh so modern in all of its poetic moments. Bravo!!
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    water777 commented on Alice In Wounder Land

    10-07-2009

    Soooooo, you flip pain and sorrow onto its funny side. I still sense some deeper message, and its sad aftermath. The dark edge journey about alice was nice. You can be a rare jewel in children's science fiction.
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    LouisIII commented on Alice In Wounder Land

    10-06-2009

    yes, indeed Alice is in wonderland, good work. Peace, Louis Couturier III
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    lips_unlocked commented on Alice In Wounder Land

    10-02-2009

    intense stuff, didnt looked so from ur profile but it was really good!!
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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