THE LADY IN THE MASK.......

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    I WROTE THIS POEM ALSO A FEW YEARS BACK. AND MY FAVORIT. I WAS DEPRESSED WHEN I WROTE THIS.

    AND I'M SURE MANY OF YOU CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM

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    THE LADY IN THE MASK.......
    THERS A LADY WHO ASKS QUESTION'S WHY?
    SO SHE WEAR'S HER MASK AS A DISGUISE.
    SHE DOSNT WANT NO 1 TO SEE HER CRYS.
    SO SHE HIDES BEHIND THE MASKS
    SO SHE COULD IGNORE' AND
    DOSE'NT HAVE TO REPLY.


    THERS A LADY WHOS SAD ON THE OUTSIDE AND AS WELL AS IN.
    SO SHE WEAR'S HER MASK AS A DISGUISE SO NO CAN SEE WITH IN.
    PAIN SO DEEP SHE CANT EVEN SPEAK...SHE WEARS A MASK SO NO 1 CAN SEE THE TEAR ROLL DOWN HER CHEEK.
    THERS A LADY ASKS QUESTION'S WHY...DO YOU WEAR A MASK AS A DISGUISE.

    SHE DOSNT GIVE A REPLY.......


    THERS A LADY WHO WALKS THE STREETS @ NIGHT. WONDERIN WHY GOD WHY ?
    WHY DO I HIDE AWAY FROM MY LIFE?

    GOD DOSNT REPLY........

    THERS A LADY WHO STARES @ HER OWN REFLECTION....AND STARES...WORKS ON HER EXPRESSIONS. ...THE EXPRESSION LOOKIN AS IF SHE DOSNT CARE.

    SHE WORKS ON HER EMOTION'S AND THAT'S HER MASK.
    SHE DOSE IT SO MUCH IT STARTS TO BECOME HER LAUGH.
    THE OLD HER IS THE THING OF THE PAST SO THIS IS THE LADY BEHIND THE MASK

    THERS A KID WALKS UP AND ASK....WHY DO YOU WEAR YOUR MASK AND STAY SO STERN.......AND SHE LOOKS AND SAYS. 1 DAY YOU'LL LEARN.

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    By Karma







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    stellar commented on THE LADY IN THE MASK.......

    11-13-2009

    I like the flow with this one and that insight you make in this poem...
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    water777 commented on THE LADY IN THE MASK.......

    10-20-2009

    This is something that we all can relate to once or many times in our lives. We all wear masks, and for many reasons. But to speak upon the deep currents that drags us to the depths of our hidden emotions-now that is eye opening. I look forward to the silent-outbursts that your thoughts and pen have offered.
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    jesusfreake commented on THE LADY IN THE MASK.......

    10-14-2009

    beautiful and effortless....u are an amazing poet and i am astonished by the poems u write that the talent within it seems so efffortless...i see the comments where ppl ask u to correct ur grammar and im glad u dont because thats apart of what makes u who u are....this excellent poet who has a great talent in writing....simply amazing...
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    anglescry2 commented on THE LADY IN THE MASK.......

    10-10-2009

    very well done .. very rhyme-y but good write in general.
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    KtIrish commented on THE LADY IN THE MASK.......

    09-26-2009

    Wow. I can see myself in this one. Beautiful write Karma. 10.
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