MENT TO BE

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    THIS SONG ALSO SPEAKS FROM IT SELF.
    SOMETIMES  SOMETHINGS JUST ARENT GOOD ENOUGH FOR THE OTHER PERSON. ITS JUST HAVEING ENOUGH PRIDE IN SAYING THIS IS NOT ME.

    IF YOU LOVE THAT PERSON ENOUGH MATERIAL THINGS SHOULD NEVER MATTER. AND LOVEING ALL OF THEM INCLUDEDING THE FAULTS

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    MENT TO BE
    V1: Now i cant give you the sky above.
    But the only thing i can give you is my love
    ( my love- my love)
    I cant give you material thing's
    Cause really love should'nt cost a thing.
    -:BRIDGE:-
    CAUSE IN REALALITY THINGS ARENT AS THEY SEEM
    THIS AINT THE MOVIES OR A FAIRYTALE OR BUT A DREAM.
    THIS IS REAL THIS ME THIS IS ALL I KNO
    THER'S A CHOICE YOU JUST HAVE TO SEE. AND HERES WHAT YOU NEED TO KNO

    -:CHOURES:-
    I CANT BE THAT GIRL YOU WANT ME TO BE.
    THIS IS ME THIS IS ALL I KNO HOW TO BE.
    EIRTHER YOUR HAPPY OR YOUR NOT.
    CAUSE LOVE IS ALL I GOT.
    SO
    EXCEPT RESPECT IT OR LET ME GO.
    OR WE -JUST- AINT-.............. MENT TO BE.

    V2:
    I dont kno how to be some one else.
    the only thing i kno how to be is my self.
    I cant give you everything you ask for.
    love should feel no pressure....It should feel adored.
    this aint a soup opera or drama.
    this real this me am i your everything.
    thers a choice to be made..... just hear me say


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    By Karma

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    countrypoet commented on MENT TO BE

    11-04-2009

    It would be wonderful if all men and women felt this way and expressed such love to their mates.There would be less problems and couples breaking up.Thanks for sharing such a beautiful and inspiring sentiment.I love this song.
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    countrypoet commented on MENT TO BE

    10-23-2009

    This is a very nice song and has a good rhythm to the words and a nice flow through. A nice tribute to the gift of love.I really like this song.
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    Artie commented on MENT TO BE

    08-29-2009

    You certainly have a talent for writing lyrics - this is a great song. 10 from me.
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    Fredrick commented on MENT TO BE

    07-03-2009

    every thing a man searches for in a woman not stuck on them selves or what they can get out of it true love is always the answer
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    wildpendigus commented on MENT TO BE

    06-15-2009

    I like this poem and I'm sure it's meant to be , and it shows me love, like I'd like to show you love, I'd like to record you and produce your song and show you love by givijng you all your royalties and dues possible. grecowong@yahoo.com
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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