A Girl With a Rose

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    Inspired by the first really free elections in Armenia since 1998. So Velvet Revolution completed. And I saw a picture of a pretty young lady, who came to vote with a red rose in her hands.

    A Girl With a Rose
    Proud to be voting for the first time in Armenia, inside the building housing my kindergarten :))). 
    Armenia holds its first Parliamentary Elections after peaceful VelvetRevolution in May.  We have journalists and observers present from 40+ countries including Denmark. #armvote2018, #velvetrevolution, #proud, #historicday
    This photo inspired this beautiful poem, thank you Ruben Ghafadaryan
    Under permission by our incredible Tatevik Revazian I am sharing this song. Hope you will like it.
    Revolution
    I was so apathetic hiding myself behind a dyke
    Stating that these ones had been worse than those.
    So what re-evaluation does look like?
    I don’t know… Maybe like a girl with a rose!
    Sorry for my corns grown to stand your spikes.
    Silent feeling can turn to a faith as soon as it goes.
    So what the revelation does look like?
    I don’t know… Maybe like a girl with a rose
    Starting from my first song I still climb and hike
    Looking for a love to seed and to see how it grows.
    So what the resolution does look like? 
    I don’t know… Maybe like a girl with a rose.
    I still have to rhyme one final crushing strike
    To win the battle between the poetry and the prose. 
    So what the revolution does look like?
    I don’t know… But is just a girl with a rose!
    09 Dec 2018, Yerevan, Elections Day
    (c) Ruben "Reckon" Ghafadaryan
    I was so apathetic hiding myself behind a dyke
    Stating that these ones had been worse than those.
    So what re-evaluation does look like?
    I don’t know… Maybe like a girl with a rose!

    Sorry for my corns grown to stand your spikes.
    Silent feeling can turn to a faith as soon as it goes.
    So what the revelation does look like?
    I don’t know… Maybe like a girl with a rose

    Starting from my first song I still climb and hike
    Looking for a love to seed and to see how it grows.
    So what the resolution does look like? 
    I don’t know… Maybe like a girl with a rose.

    I still have to rhyme one final crushing strike
    To win the battle between the poetry and the prose. 
    So what the revolution does look like?
    I don’t know… But is just a girl with a rose!

    09 Dec 2018, Yerevan, Elections Day
    (c) Ruben "Reckon" Ghafadaryan

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    AAScreamPlz commented on A Girl With a Rose

    12-15-2018

    Very good, but it does not wrap together. I like the sentence maybe like a girl with a rose but everything else does not have the same feeling as this sentence.
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