You Never Gave Up

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    This goes out to my daughter, congrats Mom knew you could do it! I'm so proud of you! CLASS OF 2010!

    You Never Gave Up

                                        Today is your day 
                              You did it you went all the way
                       As I watched you through out the years 
                        You conquered each one of your fears
                             As you choose your road in life 
                    Always strive to make the best of your life 
                          Yet I know I didn't make it easy 
                      My sweet baby nothing in life is easy 
                 I want to saw take this path, no take this one
                             Yet I can't take it for you
             Only you know you know which one is the right one
        In knowing that, know that no one can make you or break you
                  Never quit, don't stop doing what you're doing
                                 I want to say I knew you
                            Was I wrong I didn't have a clue
                    You taught me to be more understanding 
                                To not be so demanding 
             I know in my heart I don't have to worry about you                  When it counts you always do what you have to do to make it through
     At times I knew you were fed up, with the things you were going threw 
                       Yet you hung in there, you made it through
                     Just wanted you to know, I'm so proud of you   



                                           copy write May 2, 2010  
                                                      jansolo

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    lonewolf commented on You Never Gave Up

    05-04-2010

    Beautifully written. The success of your daughter, is a reflection of not only the hard work and dedication she put forth in her efforts, but also the hard work and dedication you gave in raising her correctly. So now you both can reap the rewards of your labor. Congratulations to both!!
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    eddie14 commented on You Never Gave Up

    05-03-2010

    some time life shows up and its too much to bare but we keep truging the road and soon its gets better NEVR GIVE UP THE FIGHT the fight of always diong what is right!!
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    SuSpence commented on You Never Gave Up

    05-03-2010

    Very nice poem Jan. I would suggest that whomever you wrote this for, you get this poem nice up in really nice caligraphy and framed and give it as a give. Very emotional and meaningful. This is the kind of gift that really comes from the heart. -Spence
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