Only When I Cry

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    trust in the Lord with all your heart and you will get the reward in the end

    Only When I Cry

                                                Sometimes I feel
                                     Like crying, dying, and trying
                                        To be what I can not be
                                              That's not right 
                                              That's not real
                                           But thats the way 
                                           I sometimes feel
                                              Love is Love
                                     That.... I can not change
                         But why does love cause me so much pain
                                         My heart does Bleed
                                     At this two edged sword 
                                           Is it me oh! God 
                                    Or is it you ...... My Lord?!
                                            Forgive me Lord 
                                 My doubting heart....... Brings
                                          tears to my eyes
                                            I feel like this  
                                          Only when I cry 


                                                     copy write June 5, 2002
                                                                jansolo

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    purpleswan commented on Only When I Cry

    05-04-2010

    Very moving poem. It isn't easy to stay strong all the time but it is easier with the Lord there to help. Thanks for sharing......Swan
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    jansolo

    05/04/2010

    thank you for reading my poem, have a great day

    eddie14 commented on Only When I Cry

    05-03-2010

    I'll cryb right along with you when I say the same thing to our LORD its ahrd sometimes and we lean on our own understanding buit as my poem said if we look up GOD is there
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    purdylox commented on Only When I Cry

    04-28-2010

    that is a great poem really gets emotions moving.......
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    jansolo

    04/29/2010

    thank you for reading my poem and for seeing what I see

    lonewolf commented on Only When I Cry

    04-28-2010

    Wow!! That poem says a lot and really hits home for me. I feel like that all the time. This is definately going to my favorites. I love your writing Jan!, Please publish a book so others can enjoy your wonders.
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    jansolo

    04/28/2010

    thank you so much for your wonderful words they mean a lot have a great nite chuck you're a great guy!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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