How Do I Say Goodbye

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    Time heals all wonds and forgiveness can bring you so nuch peace. Never lose your life in a man, know in your heart that God is going to send you some one far better. So for give and move on!

    How Do I Say Goodbye

                       It seems my world is incomplete without you
       Yet it breaks my heart to know that I will never really know you 
                  To say we've always enjoyed each others company
                                At times I've felt like a dummy
       I believed so much in you, I never took the time to pay attention to you
                     Yet you keep telling me this is not what you want
                              But what about me what about I want
       Please, Please try to understand, its not my fault faith dealt us this hand
               I want to say in my heart I wished this day would never come
                Yet I hate looking into your eyes seeing what we've become
                                I know in love you take your chances
                   But my heart keeps saying you never gave me a chance
     It hurts parting from you, it brings me more pain than you will ever know
                I know this has to be, but will you think of me tomorrow
         I heard you my love, but I didn't listen, I didn't listen, I didn't listen
                        I was so caught up in the love I have for you
                                My only focus was being with you 
             I'm not saying good-bye, I'm just saying see you later for now 
                      I did my best I have to get over you some how 
                         I love you I do, I just don't know what to do 
                     Yet my heart, my heart will never stop loving you 
                This is killing me so much to have to say good-bye to you 



                                                        jansolo 
                                                    oct. 2, 2008
     

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    eddie14 commented on How Do I Say Goodbye

    05-18-2010

    with your words and reading others words its easy to say goodby but as a writer telling someone good by the words did not come sweet and all i was left was the memories of the good time (very little ) that we spent I tried so hard to make it work and i dident listen !! thank you. for making it easy to close this chapter in my life now i know Im not alone
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    jansolo

    05/18/2010

    Thank you for understanding how I feel, it is getting better day by day. Time does bring about a change.

    lonewolf commented on How Do I Say Goodbye

    04-19-2010

    very sad poem. i could feel your heart breaking. ive been in that situation many times. very nice write
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    Artie commented on How Do I Say Goodbye

    04-17-2010

    This is such a heartbreaking piece - you really express your feelings well - 10 from me
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    jansolo

    04/19/2010

    it hurts so much when someone you put all you trust and love in then they just up and leave you and dont even say goodbye

    Blueroad commented on How Do I Say Goodbye

    04-15-2010

    I'm not familiar enough with English poetry, just can say your poem is full of passion!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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