Save My Child

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    This is to my son Solomon Jr. I will never give up on you! I know in my heart you will successed and I can't wait to see the man you are destined to be! I am your biggest fan for life! Never ever, ever give up on you!

    Save My Child

                   I look in your eyes and I want so much for you
                                 I pray for a better life for you
                                   Yet I watch you everyday
                   My heart is hurting cause you've gone astray
                   Even though I know your heart is full of good
                     You keep telling me you're misunderstood
                                     How do I save my child
                     Tell me how can I stop him from going wild
                     I have so many hopes and dreams for him
               He's my diamond in the ruff what a beautiful gem
                        I'm fighting so he can have a good life 
            I don't want him to wind up behind someone's knife 
                                      I will contuine to pray
                      Asking the Lord to show me the way
                                    Yet I will never give up
         I know in my heart I will fight for him till my time is up 
                                           I love my child
        Just want him to know I've been with him all the while
                       I'm his mother and I'm doing all I can
                I leave it to his father to teach him how to be a man



                                                                                        jansolo

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    eddie14 commented on Save My Child

    05-04-2010

    love and guidence in the family keeps the child growing up the right way had my MOM and Dad been there for me I would not have grown up with hate in my heart and rebelled to the point of a life of gangs and prison but now Iam a sigel Father who raised a little girl and she has a grandaughter I love them and I show them That I love them everyday!!
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    Chaos128 commented on Save My Child

    03-12-2010

    A poem and a prayer at the same time, and both of them deep and meaningful. The found the picture you selected striking; I've heard of the "black sheep of the family", but a black wolf? Looks like you've got your work cut out for you.
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