Woman to Man

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    Woman to Man

    Velvet to leather. Silk to steel

    Coral to rock. Ocean to sand

    Sky to earth. Feather to fin

    Color to gray. Woman to man


    He longs for her. She desires him

    Her wafting scent drifts jasmine fresh

    Drawn to her as fawn to stream

    Watching her, he catches his breath


    Runs his hands along her smooth curves

    Dew drops glisten glowing in moon

    Tingling pleasure eagerly waits

    His lips to hers so pouty and rouge


    Their bodies touching ever so slight

    She loves to tantalize and tease

    Sensation of bodies becoming one

    Door to her heart she gives him her keys


    Valentine’s Day, 2010

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Woman to Man

    08-03-2010

    wow, very well written my friend. I stumbled once on one sentence but I think that was just me, not the write....lol.....I loved it.....I don't think I would be able to do my sensual writing in such short pieces....but I may try.......lol thanks for the wonderful read loves ya asha
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    Oblaidon

    08/03/2010

    No, I can see how you can stumble. The rhyming wasn't perfect, but when the words fit you have to bend a little.

    LeslieMay commented on Woman to Man

    06-09-2010

    Sweet and sensual all in one!! I love the first stanza best, your comparisons of woman to man. Beautifully written!!
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    castlemist commented on Woman to Man

    03-17-2010

    This is a really nice poem...good work...................
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    Maleficent commented on Woman to Man

    03-02-2010

    this is a beautiful expression of love... write on! ;)
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    BringMeBullets commented on Woman to Man

    02-25-2010

    This is a pretty poem. Thank you for sharing. I like the message that lies under the surface. Very good. It reminds me of a romantic love novel. It's cute. :)
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    Oblaidon

    03/01/2010

    Thanks sweetie :)

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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