Love Embraced

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    Love Embraced

    Love Embraced


    Feeling the warmth,
    our bodies enlaced.
    Rippling tingles,
    our naked embrace.
    Entwined with love,
     our sensual kiss.
    Man and woman
     in marital bliss.


    Passion of ours,
    a genuine gift.
    Bodies weakened,
    souls setting adrift.
    She looks at me
    with big, brown eyes.
    Love me always?
    she asks with a sigh.


    Deep from my heart,
    I give her my love.
    This Mexican beauty
    I’m speaking of.
    Woman of mine,
    her tender soft touch.
    What have I done
    to deserve so much?


    Tells by my eyes,
     if I’m feeling sad.
    Vowed to each other
    through good times and bad.
    Searches my soul,
    she really cares.
    Gave her my heart
    these twenty-five years.


    By Oblaidon
    To my wife
    Christmas, 2009

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Love Embraced

    08-03-2010

    yes and I really liked this one too......you are such a great writer......so sensual this is using such different words and less descriptive then the dance I did but still how you got it to be so sensual and erotic.......I have much to learn..........lol loves ya and thanks asha
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    Oblaidon

    08/03/2010

    Thank you I am glad you enjoyed this one.

    alb29oclfl commented on Love Embraced

    03-31-2010

    a passionate tribute to the love you two share.........................................
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    Oblaidon

    03/31/2010

    Thanks for reading. :)

    castlemist commented on Love Embraced

    03-17-2010

    that's pretty dude....I really like it................
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    SavVySam commented on Love Embraced

    01-19-2010

    Hi there~I saw you comment on Richards page and thought I would come and read. I enjoyed the loving tribute to your wife, just beautiful work!
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    Bettysrainbow48 commented on Love Embraced

    01-18-2010

    This a very romatic poem. Done quit well .Described in a poetic rethum
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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