wold cind

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    Poem Commentary

    a calligrapher, artist and writer, which is worse? Hard to say, sometimes nothing beats a good brush, ink and an idle moment with magnets in its guts.

    wold cind

     words 
    and
    litter
    and 
    wind

    separated by gusts

    and bristles

    ink, nib, treetops, pages, branches, thoughts...

    eyes

    leaves

    words

    brushed about scattered 

    ...meanings...

    orlefttolietogether

    whichisworse

    witchesworse

    switch horse

     

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    Jammin commented on wold cind

    11-06-2011

    Oh I love this! So youthful and playful. Makes me nostalgic. A 10 from me.
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    shallenemcgrath commented on wold cind

    02-13-2011

    This is an interesting poem... I feel you finding the versatility in writing. I love what you do with the structure on the page. I also have switched horses, just to try and figure out which was worse.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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