rhythm in and....

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  • Breathing
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  • Breath
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  • Love
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  • Joy
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  • The Sea
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  • Passion
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  • Life

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    Rhythm...LIfe is rhythm. Joy, passion, love, excitement Breathe it in...exude it into your day.

    rhythm in and....



    Core: heart; lungs; liver;

    Experience: JOY! Love! Passion!

    Breathe....inhale deeply

    Breathe....know thy self

    Breathe....in....

    Breathe...out...

    Life in....Love out...

    breathe...share.... 

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    RHPeat commented on rhythm in and....

    02-19-2011

    The awakening of the breath of life. The rhythm of life itself in heart and lung synchronized in one thing, living! Nicely done H. A poet friend//RH Peat
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    lonewolf commented on rhythm in and....

    02-16-2011

    beautifully done. great words to live (love), by. going in with my favorites
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    VoiceMilkNHoney

    02/17/2011

    I am humbled, Lone. Thank you!

    mdpoetgirl commented on rhythm in and....

    02-16-2011

    i like the line "Life in... Love out..." Good approach to living, and I like how you can't help but take a deep breath as you read this piece. Cool...
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    VoiceMilkNHoney

    02/16/2011

    Thanks! I love that commentary, love! that's amazing...perfect! exactly what i planned!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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