When

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True honest friends are an extension of our family, and ofter family can be our best friends - YOU'LL ALWAYS KNOW WHEN

When

When

 

When there is danger, I will go before you.

When there is confrontation I will stand beside you.

When you need encouragement, I will be behind you all the way.

 

When you are ill I will comfort you.

When you cannot stand, I will pick you up.

When you cannot go any further I will carry you.

 

When I was frightened, you protected me.

When I faced confrontation, you were there to support me.

When I needed encouragement, you were my inspiration.

 

When I was sick you made me better.

When I had fallen, you helped me up.

When I thought I could not go on you allowed me to lean on you.

 

 

When is for when-ever:

When it’s the beginning and when it’s the end.  When I need a smile or you need a friend.  Just say WHEN……

 

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FitzHouston09 commented on When

04-13-2010

Nice poem. The kind of love described in this poem transcends the love you mentioned from family and true friends. It also describes that unconditional love felt in a close relationship with God. Thanks for sharing.

Tempy commented on When

08-20-2009

When is for when-ever: When it’s the beginning and when it’s the end. When I need a smile or you need a friend. Just say WHEN…… foo fighters comes to mind gotta promise not to stop when I say when. I liked this its a heart felt loving embrace

Seek2BInspired

09/02/2009

A great pleasant outlook - thank you for sharing your words with mine...

Clementinewoods commented on When

08-16-2009

This is a beautiful poem!!! This poem is an example of a true friendship and true love. Everyone needs at least one friend like this. One is always available in Jesus, because He'll be a Friend that will stick closer to you than a brother!!! Thanks for sharing and be blessed!!!

Seek2BInspired

09/02/2009

You my dear are always a pleasure to hear from... I love your way of thinking!

GentleT commented on When

08-12-2009

When there is no one else there it is wonderful to have one you can depend on.

Seek2BInspired

09/02/2009

You said it all - how true, the need for friendship is a lifeblood to the soul... the right friend can make the world a different place and always guarantee a smile on ones face!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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