What I see...

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    What I see...
    Those brownish eyes
    Oh yes
    Those eyes as I see in your soul
    You are not alone
    I see the glitter and fire of othes
    In your soul
    Waiting, Living, feeling
    As I peer deeper
    I can see and be touched by you
    What I see…

    Years to come
    Deep within your eyes
    Feeling the color of your thoughts
    Years of growing
    Teaching
    Laughing, Crying
    Wondering to see their graduation
    The lose of their first tooth
    First steps
    First words
    First girlfriend
    Or
    First boyfriend

    A car
    A License
    Moving out
    College

    What I see…
    In your eyes
    As I look
    Kissing you
    Feeling you

    What I see…
    In your soul
    Our Children

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    kittylilly commented on What I see...

    11-01-2010

    beautiful peom to a beautiful life, you are very talented person.
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    Pizzala commented on What I see...

    02-17-2009

    Thats deep. Is this your girlfriend your talking about! You sound in love:) Awww... Good job babe!
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    leelee62002 commented on What I see...

    02-13-2009

    beautiful poem very moving what you see is life
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    riceryder commented on What I see...

    02-13-2009

    wow great work. i like your writing style keep it up man
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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