Shock

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    Shock
    Partial Door
    The home I grew up in
    As far as I could remember

    My parents room
    Dark... Waking in the middle of the night...
    Frighten of a nightmare
    3am...

    Hearing... Wondering...
    Curiosity...
    My Parents...

    The Noise
    Savage... primal... Wild Kingdom...
    I think?

    Turning on the light
    Seeing... What I did not want to see
    Two legs... V shaped

    My fathers butt...
    In between my mother Leggs?

    Frighten... Shocked...
    Veil lifting

    Realizing...
    One thing

    My Parents are human.
    That is how I was made.
    One Morning
    3am.

    Shocking...
    The True...
    In Plainview...

    Shocking...

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    Kr1ssy1 commented on Shock

    02-12-2009

    This poem has many emotions depending on the point of view one takes; as an adult reading it’s humorously embarrassing, as a child feeling is horrifically shocking. Great use of description.
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    bforibus commented on Shock

    02-05-2009

    very nice exposure of a child's mind. completed iniation . welcome to dps
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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