Holding

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    Holding
    Your Hands
    As you hold my hands
    I feel complete
    I feel loved

    How I look into your eyes
    To see how you feel complete
    I love you
    You love me

    You and me
    Hand and Hand
    In life
    We are whole
    Together

    Holding each other
    In a Hug
    In hands
    As we walk into the sunrise of life
    To have so many years together
    The rest of your life

    Your beauty
    Your curly hair
    Dark strands
    Of beauty
    Your olive skin
    Your dark eyes
    Of embellishing light
    Lighting up my heart
    And soul
    You complete my
    Puzzle

    As I am blessed by you
    You made me love again
    Hand in Hand
    You hold me in your hands
    Holding

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    Kr1ssy1 commented on Holding

    02-06-2009

    My honest opinion is this is a very appropriate piece for dedication to a certain loved one. I can almost hear the words flowing along with an acoustic guitar in the key of G.
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    whytecherries25 commented on Holding

    02-03-2009

    Your are truly amazing how your poems are so visual and yet something I can relate to which is love.Great piece!
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    rumani commented on Holding

    02-03-2009

    Oh this is lovely and I like the rhythm very much, yes there is a very 'spoken word' feel to this poem and the rhythm really helps it flow along. I like 'walk into the sunrise of life' as opposed to sunset. It conjures the wonderful feeling of how in
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