Wedding Vows

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    Wedding Vows
    Valium induces, my dream reproduces
    and the childcat has spun!
    While all sleep reduces
    weeping and reality has won!
    Man, this herd better run,
    I am beyond postal,
    falling shells and empty gun!
    Hostile force within, I am
    redeemer and I am a sin!
    Lonely maurader and I am
    the father where hell is to
    begin.
    Shadow delights, you whom is
    fright,
    I laid low
    on my wedding night....

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    simoneaugustus commented on Wedding Vows

    10-06-2009

    Breathtaking! I love the line 'Hostile force within, I am redeemer and I am sin.' You write very powerfully; it is impressive.
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    knight4696 commented on Wedding Vows

    09-27-2009

    a very interesting piece. I like the rhyming style and the flow. My favorite line is: "Lonely maurader and I am, the father where hell is to, begin." Nice work.
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