WE SHALL ALL BE CHANGED

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     I wrote this as a song for a so called Church of God, but the minister didn't think it was Biblically accurate??? I challenge anyone to show inaccuracy?

    WE SHALL ALL BE CHANGED

     Jesus made us a promise
    We know He's not a liar
    On the day of Pentecost
    His Spirit came in tongues of fire
    Now that He lives in us
    We shall all be changed
    The day and hour we do not know?
    It's a time the Father has arranged


    So now we wait on Jesus
    To come and take His bride
    In the twinkle of an eye
    We'll meet Him in the sky
    Our old bodies taken
    Changed into eternal beings
    Not knowing what we'll look like?
    We'll all be Priests and kings

    At the seventh trumpet
    With Michael's mighty call
    The dead in Christ will rise first
    Then those left one and all
    Will we be as Jesus
    Or in the form of mortal man?
    Nobody knows it for sure
    It's all God's master plan

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    mamasan commented on WE SHALL ALL BE CHANGED

    11-23-2009

    That is a beautiful you write songman and I enjoyed it and was reminded that Jesus loves me (all of us i.e.) and that is good to remember. Your song really serves to honor and glorify our master and this is the time of the year it is good to be remindied. Thank you songman and may your holiday be full of good food plus a lot of happiness and personal good cheer. love ya mamasan
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    jesusfreake commented on WE SHALL ALL BE CHANGED

    11-23-2009

    i do actually challenge this a bit. When we go to Heaven im pretty sure there is something different that occurs...however this poem shows an excellent flow and its quite well put together...wonderful!
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    songmanpoet

    11/23/2009

    Thank you for your great rating. Yes we go to heaven asleep (dead) then at Christ's coming we will rise and reign 1000 years. Then comes the final White Throne Judgement, after that the new Heavens and Earth where God will dwell with man, on the New Earth, Revalations 21 -22. Again thank you and be very blessed. Minister, songmanpoet, Sam

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