"APACHE GIRL"

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    I wrote this in Honor of a friend of mine's daughter, Jessica to help her in her journey.

    "APACHE GIRL"

     Apache girl so pure and true,
    Standing proud and bold.
    The wind blows threw long black hair,
    Your spirit's essence soars as the Eagles told.

    The brightness of you ora stands steadfast,
    My eye's are blessed to see.
    No man can hold you captive now,
    Like the Wolf you must roam free.

    May the Lord above protect you heart,
    Trail of tears will hold no bind.
    No other is quite like Apache girl,
    For you are one of a kind.

    Your features hold pride of times long past,
    Lovely eye's of the spirit clear.
    I lift my prayers above the land,
    Thankful we are so near.

    Great Spirit God has set your path,
    Walk with the courage of truth.
    He will make many your days on Earth,
    Apache girl be blessed and happy in youth.


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    ansari commented on "APACHE GIRL"

    06-23-2010

    Its a beautiful poem ' Apache girl' I can also connect it to many other nationalities who like to hold their heads on their shoulders and like to live bold and beautiful and independent. thank you . a 10 from me.
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    songmanpoet

    06/23/2010

    Thank you for the wonderful comment. I've know her many years as well as other's as you say. That's what makes certain peoples of every culture great people. Thank again. Songmanpoet.

    songmanpoet commented on "APACHE GIRL"

    03-08-2010

    Thank you all for your very very kind comments. I'm proud to be an Honorable part of the American Indians tribes. Sam.
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    earthly commented on "APACHE GIRL"

    03-01-2010

    beautiful tribute-blessings upon your 'Apache Girl'...Earthly
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    StandingBear commented on "APACHE GIRL"

    03-01-2010

    A fantastic work you've written for your friend's daughter. Great write!
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    shannie76 commented on "APACHE GIRL"

    03-01-2010

    I love this poem, you capture the very essence of her spirit and her beauty. Great write Sam!
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    songmanpoet

    03/01/2010

    Thanks so much Shannie. I pray it's liked by other's. I've never won on a computer poetry site B 4. I have 12-15 awards in paper, but none on computer. Love ya my new ,new friend here. Samwhatever.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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