unspoken words

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unspoken words

Unspoken Words

Say what u mean and mean what u say
I wont put your emotions on display
your pillow is where my head lays
I see your expressions hoping i dont play around
but what u dont get your heart is what i love
the innocent smile on your face
got u regreting and wishing u never should of said what u said
or did what u did
i take nothing for granit and everything in compassion
your first action was the right one
i wont make u feel anything but
me doing what u want me to do
So u dont have to look at me like that
no pause or awkward silence
I know what u mean

Sincerelly @ Truthfully
Creation

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Rowena commented on unspoken words

09-15-2009

I returned to your poem this morning to remind myself of the simple fact that we all suffer, thanks creation you have a lot of potential talent.

Creation

09/18/2009

thank you

teasasue commented on unspoken words

09-14-2009

this is a sweet poem creation, I enjoyed it and I think it was well written,

boomboom56 commented on unspoken words

09-13-2009

Writing from the heart and putting it into words is hard to do, you make it seem simple. Pretty deep and though provoking.

Rowena commented on unspoken words

09-12-2009

I love your last line, thanks for the friend request

CatsMeow commented on unspoken words

09-11-2009

I like that poem, You have sincerly and intensity of meaning. Thank you for adding me as a friend.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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