unspoken words

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unspoken words

Unspoken Words

Say what u mean and mean what u say
I wont put your emotions on display
your pillow is where my head lays
I see your expressions hoping i dont play around
but what u dont get your heart is what i love
the innocent smile on your face
got u regreting and wishing u never should of said what u said
or did what u did
i take nothing for granit and everything in compassion
your first action was the right one
i wont make u feel anything but
me doing what u want me to do
So u dont have to look at me like that
no pause or awkward silence
I know what u mean

Sincerelly @ Truthfully
Creation

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Rowena commented on unspoken words

09-15-2009

I returned to your poem this morning to remind myself of the simple fact that we all suffer, thanks creation you have a lot of potential talent.

Creation

09/18/2009

thank you

teasasue commented on unspoken words

09-14-2009

this is a sweet poem creation, I enjoyed it and I think it was well written,

boomboom56 commented on unspoken words

09-13-2009

Writing from the heart and putting it into words is hard to do, you make it seem simple. Pretty deep and though provoking.

Rowena commented on unspoken words

09-12-2009

I love your last line, thanks for the friend request

CatsMeow commented on unspoken words

09-11-2009

I like that poem, You have sincerly and intensity of meaning. Thank you for adding me as a friend.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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