1BlackPope commented on Life goes on

09-23-2009

Very powerful and revealing. Takes balls to write from the heart! Excellent job Creation! But I have to say --- A lost soul I must be ----true we are all somewhat lost souls....no answers I must be alone physically... no way bro you are not alone physically or mentally. Reading this I was right there beside you!

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teasasue commented on Life goes on

09-14-2009

this is interesting, and i really agree with the 1st sentence of this, you dont have to be in jail doing time,. I am not sure it may just be me, but I think this one could use just a little more of something,

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Rowena commented on Life goes on

09-12-2009

This isyour best poem that I've read. It flows like a letter and is lyrical in its context you could easily put a beat to it, very good job. Rowena

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photochick commented on Life goes on

09-11-2009

Intriguing thoughts and outlook I liked how you had it set up to be almost like your writing to yourself making a promise to ones inner self very powerful and creative nice flow just as lynx said watch your spell check its a killer but none the less great write keep up the great writing

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ChrisP commented on Life goes on

09-11-2009

interesting perspective from a poet as young as Creation, You are not reinventing the emotion, but your spin, and talent with words are impressive be on your years, which means nothing really. Your entitled to your words, and they hit the senor's at full speed. You are one to keep an eye on, your talents is mighty

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