Attention

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    Attention

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    As i evaluate the things i question in this world. its so funny how others fail to recognise that this way of living is not forever. The love for things of this world is irrelevant because it doesn't matter in the next world and the more u talk to people the less they see.. Of course this is only my opinion but this is ridiculous how some peoples mind work. Its like as the years go by the easier it is for the human mind to get hypnotized and brain washed. As i speak to others and see how they feel on certain things...it gets more clear to me that nobody really knows...anything...lol seriously no one knows what they want... 

    God bless the lost & Forgotten

    Sincerely & Truthfully

    Creation

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    1BlackPope commented on Attention

    09-23-2009

    Yo...Creation! Awesome man! I like the way you write and make us think we're reading a letter intead of a poem. Defintely worthy of a good rap! You could go on and tell us or yourself what we really want...but excellent!
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    sin commented on Attention

    09-18-2009

    Evaluation ...constant assessing. ..gets real perplexing It's a reality check, see when you stop questioning the solutions you become a part of the deception I like the introspection in your pen. It says I am alive . You're right not many really know what they (we) want don't ever stop looking. A good read. enjoyed
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    teasasue commented on Attention

    09-14-2009

    well I enjoyed the read well enough, but I dont think I would consider this one a poem
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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