My random thoughts

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My random thoughts


Nothing special no plot these are just my random thoughts
Family and friends who can we depend
If my child is the beginning than who is the end
If worldly possessions is what we really love than honestly who are we thinking of
We think for ourselves and own well being than how can our lives have any meaning
While not thinking twice when we roll the dice in a dire situation there is still know sacrifice
Again nothing special no plot these are just my random thoughts
When i smile on the outside do think that you can tell that I'm dieing inside
If I effect the rhythm of how you live will you still be willing to give.
If you don't really want to know whats then why do you ask, is because your afraid you might see me asking for last.
Your not really not my friend then why do you pretend is it because too much T.V is starting a trend
Hmmm....society my most talented foe you know what you said, but i say what i know I'm not the average Joe and just for the record I hate television shows
Nothing special no plot these are just my random thoughts

Sincerely&Truthfully
Creation

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Stryx commented on My random thoughts

10-02-2009

I like your idea, you used than a couple of times when, I believe you meant then. Later you recovered. But I do like the title and the idea of it.

Creation

10/05/2009

I thank you for your honest opinions

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

Creation’s Poems (7)

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Title Comments
Choice 3
Addiction 3
My random thoughts 1
unspoken words 5
Attention 3
Life goes on 8
The Beginning 6