TORRID ZONE

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    TORRID ZONE


    When i am alone
    i sit in a torrid zone
    I look around for you
    Wondering would you always
    be so unknown

    When i sit alone

    No i won't die
    Because i am seeking a reply

    An answer is what i want
    Oh! this loneliness is a haunt

    Take me out of this STORM CONE
    GOD I cant face it by my own

    WHEN I AM ALONE
    I SIT INA A TORRID ZONE

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    drewking commented on TORRID ZONE

    01-23-2009

    nice piece of work..
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    Plot121 commented on TORRID ZONE

    12-12-2008

    This poem has such a vast description about it that its hard for the reader to draw from any exsamples because there was hardly any there. I think if you described mostly a background to it this would be a better poem. Robert
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    Phoenix9 commented on TORRID ZONE

    12-06-2008

    Syed; i have read all your poems,I know i am not perfect and i do mess up on spelling and form, you have a potential to being a very good poet, watch your spelling and proof read before you submit, the one thing i notice most was the fact that you co
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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