CAN I FIGHT

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    CAN I FIGHT

     Tired and torn I am 
    No more Can I Fight
    The darkness continues 
    but no signs of light
    Swollen are my eyes
    They have been flowing all night

    NO MORE CAN I FIGHT 

    Waiting in want for your sight
    A river starts flowing again
    as the day departs
    with the arrival of night
    No more can I fight  

    Dont make me blight
    Give me your sight
    Give me a light
    So that I stand and say YES I CAN FIGHT


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    blackfootlady commented on CAN I FIGHT

    11-27-2010

    It's very simply.The poem is very good and has a good point at the end.nice write.I like this.God Bless-Black
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    rougepriest commented on CAN I FIGHT

    10-21-2009

    what are you fighting about ? how long has the fight gone on that you are so tired, why are you waiting for some one elses sight is your vision bad? blight refers to a cities ghettos and their condition, it has good rhyming but i am confused as to the subject
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    syed

    05/28/2010

    I m fighting for keeping the love of my beloved pure!!!! and this fight is been going on since the bow of love poked my heart. I know it might be confusing for you cause you might not feel the same way I do, that's perfectly fine!!!! thanks for your comment, and i hope I could explain it more to you but the words are to less to explain!!!!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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