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  • Devotion

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    When would the day come
    when I have the path
    to walk towards you
    Leaving behind this wrath

    Towards wisdom I’ll stride
    To catch the holy light
    This world would mean nothing to me
    as I would be flying free

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    heartofapoet commented on Question

    05-19-2009

    In my opinion this poem has been completed in two short paragraphs.....Sometimes short and sweet, much like Emily Dickinson, is all you need. Nicely done.
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    syed

    05/28/2009

    thank you so much ......

    CdeM commented on Question

    02-25-2009

    great again, I just hate the shortness of it... always feels like you haven't explored all you could..
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    Corinna commented on Question

    01-30-2009

    Very good question!
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    drewking commented on Question

    01-23-2009

    awesome!
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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