heaven

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    heaven
    Lets make a journey to heaven
    lets see how it feels there
    lets be scare no more
    yes we can make it to the heavenly floor

    Me and you walking along
    HEAVEN is where we belong

    No i cant see your eye with a tear
    LETS go to heaven and and make ourselves happy there.

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    exclusivelye commented on heaven

    07-21-2009

    -sounds like a desperate cry for help. I want so badly to reach out and bring you here. Away from the sorrow.
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    syed

    07/25/2009

    Thank you so much ......... SO KINd OF YOU

    sjlove commented on heaven

    01-28-2009

    you should continue this poem.. looks like you got more to say in your heart and mind.. you should write it down.
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    drewking commented on heaven

    01-23-2009

    very nice...
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    TripleD commented on heaven

    12-11-2008

    That was very heart touching.
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