Think positive

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    Think positive
    They say to think positively
    to see the world
    through anothers eyes
    what would someone
    think if they were
    to look through mine

    Would they make it
    through the day
    knowing that nothing is ok
    could they hold back the tears
    when they realize there's so much to fear

    When they step into my shoes
    would they understand
    how it feels to be abused
    or would it appear as just
    some sick chick
    like in a horror flick

    Can we really understand eachother
    by wearing the shoes of another
    I don't think we can
    for nothing ever goes as planned

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    redbloodink commented on Think positive

    04-12-2010

    Let me just say... we all go through things........ In life we have to choose to make better choices....... Listen to the soft voices..... let the inner being that is at peace lead the way...... red
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    earthly commented on Think positive

    02-11-2010

    you are sooo right-negative thinking gets us nowhere fast but, it is easy to get caught up in crap-keep thinking positive-you have a lot to share...Earthly
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    tsmith

    02/11/2010

    aww thanks

    gregster commented on Think positive

    02-10-2010

    this is the very truth i like in poetry.now i can say that is great
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    tsmith

    02/11/2010

    THANKS

    WordSlinger commented on Think positive

    05-16-2009

    Hey kiddo, this poem is absolutely great/fantastic/ I 'am very much impressed, a high 5 and a big ten plus
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    tsmith

    07/13/2009

    thanks

    lonewolf commented on Think positive

    04-21-2009

    i like the message here. i believe there is truth in the message
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