(Relationships)

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    For all those who have cheated and been cheated on

    (Relationships)

    Love is strong but so is desire

    Easily lit and continues like a wild bush fire

    Nothing can quench such a thirst

    And eventually someone will burst

    A relationship ended

    Burned by the flames

    Cheaters are awful

    But they are not he only ones to blame

    Filled with desire

    Tempted and filled with lust

    Relationships are ruined

    They are split at the seams

    Love is lost if u don’t remember to believe

    Believe in the love that was there before

    Believe in that someone you loved and adored

    Don’t forget the passion

    The happy times left in the past

    Remember those moments of perfect harmony

    Remember he loves you

    But don't forget the pain

    Give it another chance

    But remeber what important

    and how you wanted to love him til the end

    Forgive but don"t forget

    and please dont let this be the end

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    jesterescapade commented on (Relationships)

    09-11-2010

    Nice read! Forgiving is good and NOT forgetting is better. Good advice in this one. It felt like you had alot of you in this.
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    Artie commented on (Relationships)

    09-06-2010

    I like what you say here. I may be wrong, but I feel that relationships end, long before they're over. We usually know the truth before it happens. 10 from me
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    tsmith

    09/06/2010

    ya this is true sometimes we like to prolong the end though in hopes that we can rekindle the flame we once had. thanks for the ten

    jj1562 commented on (Relationships)

    09-04-2010

    good poem i know just how you feel I give you a ten
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    Mandi commented on (Relationships)

    08-31-2010

    just a very wise poem.... don't let love end here.... so many people quit the first issue that comes up no one wants to work at anything anymore
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    Musicmynded1 commented on (Relationships)

    04-29-2010

    Just letting u know that i read from time to time... i usually read when i see ppl in chat... sometimes dont always leave comments, but im trying to. Keep on always writing, this is great concern along with great advice within a poem..ty
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